Hiccimimups Website Suggestions Please

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Post by Hiccimimups »

Hello All,

http://hiccimimups.com/

I am looking for some feedback to add to the layout and design. What do you think?

Thanks,
Cory
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Was this produced by Web Builder?
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Check the source code andyp that is always the easiest way...
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I did ;) I was being ironic ;) based on the date that poster joined this forum

I think this is an advert :) What does Pablo charge for adverts ;)

However the poster wants an opinion on the site..

Here is mine... Delete and start again with WB 14
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I think this is an advert
Oh I agree totally, and not to sound to offensive against it, it is to much like a template even if multi page, it still looks like it is premade just doesn't have a natural feel to it.
I will contact Pablo on this when I have a minute.
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:D I find the font used is terrible.... :)
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Some of the colour choices are not great either because a dark background and black font aren't exactly ideal and makes for some very hard reading. A viewer should not have to strain their eyes.
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Yes WB was used 100%

I do agree with the green and black it is hard to read. How can I keep the grass affect for the characters if it goes away?

I suppose the font isn't the best choice for a website. It was meant to be kid friendly.
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Hmm if the target audience is children I think it is a pretty great website but as I see a shop I'm assuming your target is parents which in that case it's kinda annoying to the eyes.

But structurally it's ok.
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Ok... I updated the entire website for a cleaner feel. There are a few items I'm still figuring out. What do you think now?

WB14

Thanks

-Cory
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