Feedback to 2 responsive websites

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Adrian
 
 
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Feedback to 2 responsive websites

Post by Adrian » Tue Nov 14, 2017 11:29 am

Hello all,

I finished 2 websites for a customer, please give me a feedback:

The first: www.panorama-bilderrahmen.com, a website about a panorama frame,
4 breakpoints, full responsive.

The second, www.eckbilderrahmen.com, almost identical with the first,
4 breakpoints, full responsive.

A real challenge at both designs was the galery. Here I used bxslider, because he has the "swipe "function.
I've paid attention that the menu bar don't overlap the content, the background image.

Thank you in advance.

Best Regards, Adrian

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Re: Feedback to 2 responsive websites

Post by pajadt » Tue Nov 14, 2017 3:19 pm

Hi Adrian

More stuff here must to do, Friend
very hard is do design with image as background, to be visual perfect, for this type design need more fine tunnings to be realy good design, me personaly i most not work design with this type design.

- First web VERY GOOD idea is this panel menu - here maybe you can give fade css3 animation
- Also mu suggestion is to give #575656 at fonts because that is second color from logo - and after that you must give transparency which give visibilty that fonts, also you must work with fonts, Typography is most important part at any design, also in WEB DESIGN - that give nice feeling and good visual look.
- Transparency - You give to much transparency i think / try to play with that and see result / because you have always image as background
- Size grid and colums
You used mixed sizes width grids - one is fluid second is fived etc, My suggestion is to have rules for that, Example if have great image with good resolution - that can use to be fluid / left colums image - right text label etc /
Also i see you use text with padding - suggestion is nice but give bigger padding 20 EXAMPLE - you see it be better

http://www.panorama-bilderrahmen.com/farben.html
Here is example how not looks good, when have picture as background, that must solve to be better visible - try to add overlay color

Anyway that is few suggestion, website is large to give any detail
Second web is out for me personaly, so to resume
WORK ON TYPOGRAPHY FONTS AND Transparency website
That is my impression
and Best Regards
Pajadt MA Design

Adrian
 
 
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Re: Feedback to 2 responsive websites

Post by Adrian » Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:00 am

Hello Pajadt,

thank you for the feedback and for your time.
You have right, some things are not good.
I'll will try to make some changes to the project.

Best Regards, Adrian

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