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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by ALWAYSLEARNING » Thu Jan 03, 2019 3:47 am

I am looking at your website from my desktop computer, and I can say that you did a good job by providing all the important infos on one page. The boxes with all that info in your carousel need to be the same size to avoid any visual annoyance. I would also make the type large enough so that it can be read by people of all ages especially people whose vision is not super sharp (young and old).
Lastly, I would align the video buttons and add a "filler" button under Exercise Therapy (you can be creative with that one).
Good luck!

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by aml02873 » Thu Jan 03, 2019 1:27 pm

Thanks. I will look into that.

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by ShawnInPaso » Sat Jan 05, 2019 5:04 am

Your website looks great !

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by aml02873 » Sun Jan 06, 2019 7:27 pm

ShawnInPaso wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 5:04 am
Your website looks great !
Thxs :)

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by pajadt » Mon Jan 07, 2019 9:47 pm

Hi aml02873
|not bad, to be perfect missing few things,
- when use black. that is hard colour, and so very hard to find perfect black if have orange and green, inside whole design, i suggest to use example #202020 black, maybe looks better
- Carosel and text inside him not so good postioned, I mean the relationship between size and width text box cards, that must give better look to be nice for eyes, someone is write here about that
- One of the rules in design is the ratio of proportions, in design and fonts, so in your case if use first section i mean where is carosel, and use second and third, they are not in proportion, / for example a collection of two three sections in height, it should be like a carosel /
https://imgur.com/a/2qNKIyo
this is examaple when have section in proportions / to show case what i think, this is only showcase how i see this
- About Hover Buttons, social icons header etc / why is invisible at hover / if this some type idea in design not is good
- Maybe you can work little with fonts, if like to be better design
NOTICE: This is suggestions and if like feedback, design like design is good, give few fine stuff to be perfect

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by aml02873 » Tue Jan 08, 2019 10:47 am

Thanks Pajadt. Nice example. With our permission I will "steal" from this example. :) The hover buttons should become orange. I think something went wrong there. Thanks for your professional opinion. I am just an amateur who can learn from people like you. What do you mean by -Maybe work with fonts- . You mean other size or other types?

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Re: What do you think of this? Feedback is appreciated

Post by pajadt » Tue Jan 08, 2019 11:54 am

No prblem about design, contact me and i give to you,
- About Fonts i mean to size and type of fonts

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